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stabing pain	To LoVe	Lead	[-]
Posts: 1136 (04/26/02 15:20:28) Paradise Praise Reply Quote More My Recent Posts	Tags : None To LoVe The day I fell in love my heart stopped And time could no longer me told by any sort of clock The day I fell in love no candle could burn brighter The day I fell in love my feet couldnt be lighter And on that day I knew the world was young The only thing that lived was the innocence of the young The day I fell in love the day I lost my heart The day I fell in love was only just the start /www.lonneyscomputers.com/board/PAIN.JPG>"Dreams are made winding through my head" -System Of A Down
Aela	Re: To LoVe	#1	[-]
Posts: 4309 (04/27/02 01:52:25) Banned User Reply Quote More My Recent Posts	Excellent descriptions!! I think each of us could relate to the feeling of new love.... made me think back on my experiences. Awesome Job!!!
April Michelle	Re: To LoVe	#2	[-]
Posts: 8454 (04/27/02 19:39:42) Paradise Perpetuist Reply Quote More My Recent Posts	ahhh...yes. I could also relate. I just adore that last line. I like your descriptions...I felt like I was floating. beautiful!!! "...there'll be no shelter here. the front line is everywhere..." ~Rage~
Purnima	Re: To LoVe	#3	[-]
Posts: 4676 (04/27/02 19:47:31) Paradise Prurient Reply Quote More My Recent Posts	Very sentimental....i like it. ~And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who could not hear the music~Nieztche
ouijabored	Re: To LoVe	#4	[-]
Posts: 4960 (04/27/02 21:16:06) Paradise Pet Reply Quote More My Recent Posts	Yeah, this one brings it all back. It describes those feelings of being in love pretty well...but you forgot to tell about what happens after that euphoria...never mind me, the poem was good, I'm just not in a lovey mood. ...only in dreams...